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Hi Sumit! First up, thanks for submitting your first post to the Fedora Magazine. I have done a quick review of your post, and here are a few ideas / suggestions from me. (other editors, feel free to pitch in ideas too) First up, i'd probably be a bit more direct and informative with the title, instead of "Fedora 22 Intel Graphics Woes : Here's some help" maybe something like "Solution for graphics issues on some Intel graphics chipsets in Fedora 22" (just a suggestion, feel free to change and or edit too :) ) Secondly, i'd probably remove the majority of the first paragraph and lead with the issue itself (your third paragraph) -- most people get to the magazine via third party links, so starting with the info they came for always works well. I'm thinking something like: """ Fedora 22 was [link to release annonce on fedora mag]released recently[/link], and if you are using a Pre-Sandybridge era Intel-based graphics chipset (For example, Intel 4 series motherboards with G41 chipset and GMA X4500 graphics), chances are that you might be facing graphics issues like shown in below screenshot on Fedora 22. [screenshot] """ Then after the screenshot, have your brief description of the problem, covering the points that fedora switched to a new accel method that doesnt work so well with older chipsets. Then put the solution. I found the bug for this issue (https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=1226743) which might be worth mentioning. And there updated kernels (kernel-4.0.5-300.fc22 and kernel-4.0.5-200.fc21) that fix this issue is already in updates-testing, so it is probably a better solution to recommend that people install the new package with the fix from updates testing, or wait for the package to hit the proper repos (rather than editing a config file that they may forget about and cause them issues in the future.) cheers, ryanlerch |
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