----- Original Message ----- > On 05/26/2015 09:33 AM, Matthew Miller wrote: > > On Mon, May 25, 2015 at 07:31:30PM -0400, Chris Roberts wrote: > >> I like it it covers the highlights of each of the releases. The only > >> thing that looks out of place is the Fedora 22 graphic at the bottom. > >> If it was me I would move that to the top, that way it captures the > >> readers attention and then they keep on reading. > > That's kind of a placeholder for the Fedora Magazine post, where it > > _will_ be at the top (because that's how the theme works). I guess I > > can move it in the wiki too. > > > Just moved this to the magazine, and tagged it up here. The revision i > used was the latest as of now > (https://fedoraproject.org/w/index.php?title=F22_Final_release_announcement&oldid=414252) > > the post in the magazine is here: > http://fedoramagazine.org/?p=8927&preview_id=8927&preview=true > > In a previous thread, i talked about having a both the announcement on > the wiki and a slightly different version on the magazine. I went and > drafted the alternate version up today here (it has a lot more > screenshots and all that): > > http://fedoramagazine.org/?p=8933&preview_id=8933&preview=true > > Take it or leave it -- if we prefer to have the annoucement there on the > Magazine, feel free to turf this second one, and not publish it, Thanks Ryan, I think it looks great and perfectly fits magazine format! So personally, I'd pick this one :). Jaroslav > > cheers, > ryanlerch > > -- > marketing mailing list > marketing@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > List info or to change your subscription: > https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing -- marketing mailing list marketing@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx List info or to change your subscription: https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing
