On Thu, 05 Dec 2013 10:45:15 -0600 Joe Brockmeier <jzb@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > On 12/05/2013 10:40 AM, Ruth Suehle wrote: > > Made edits. Like ya do. :-) > > Thanks! Would appreciate more eyeballs if anyone else wants to look it > over Looks overall great to me. ;) Some nitpicks (feel free to ignore): "Live Desktop DVD" seems weird. The Desktop live image is targeting a 1gb usb as far as I know... so perhaps "Live Desktop Image" ? "free and open source operating system around every six months" reads kind of weird to me. Perhaps: "free and open source operating system twice a year" (which actually wasn't true last year, but that was a weird one. ;) Or 'approximately' instead of 'around' ? Not sure. kevin
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