On Fri, Oct 11, 2013 at 11:59:06AM +1100, Ankur Sinha wrote: > From the recent comments, I think we're leaning towards the third, but > it'll change quite a few things. For instance, instead of separate > sections for Gnome3.10, KDE4.11, Sugar0.100, and E17, we'll have > something like: I think that's the best (the third approach). > == Updated desktop interfaces! == > Fedora 20 updates the original set of available desktops: Gnome to 3.10, > KDE to 4.11, Sugar to 0.100, XFCE, MATE, LXDE. These latest versions > come with a bunch of fixes, optimisations and new shiny application > sets. Fedora 20 also includes the powerful, yet flexible, Enlightment > desktop shell which was released after a decade of development. Are we assuming the audience knows what GNOME, KDE, etc. are? I'd approach it like this: == Stunning, Stable User Interface == Fedora 20 provides a polished, stable desktop that comes with an excellent selection of applications for fun and productivity. Whether you're writing a report, school paper, doing a spreadsheet, or managing music and photos, Fedora has everything you need right at your fingertips. # # # For users who aren't familiar with the applications, I think "KDE, Sugar, XFCE, MATE" is a little overwhelming. > Similarly, instead of Apache OOO and Libreoffice, we'll have: > == Not one, but two office suites! == > etc. I wouldn't even mention that. (And, technically, don't we also have KOffice, etc.?) > The major drawback is that the new stuff doesn't get as much lime light > as I'd like it to get (since we're proud of showcasing newest available > software in each release). I'd like to have a flyer dedicated to > changes, one that only goes "What's new in Fedora 20?". It's what most > of our users look forward to in a new release: "Ooooo! What's Fedora > changing this time? Is there a new software set?" I think we'll still highlight the newest software, but not in the flier. In other communications, we'll still be broadcasting that. Best, jzb -- Joe Brockmeier | Open Source and Standards, Red Hat jzb@xxxxxxxxxx | http://community.redhat.com/ Twitter: @jzb | http://dissociatedpress.net/ -- marketing mailing list marketing@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing
