Thanks for your feedback, that is the reason I need some help here atleast with the text what I am using. So that it could be made grammar and language error free. Please let me know if anyone could provide me the text story which could fit in the video. On 6/30/13, Matthew Miller <mattdm@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > On Sun, Jun 30, 2013 at 08:57:09AM -0400, Ruth Suehle wrote: >> I still would prefer we avoid the weird Star Wars mixed metaphor with the >> person in IRC hunting the cat... there's a lot going on here. I'm also >> not >> certain Robyn would be all that excited about being Princess Robyn. We >> definitely can't say "Red Heat fighters." > > On that same page, it appears that there's some bit about 'rebel > contributors' who apparently tried to steal Fedora's plans and put bugs in > the kernel. I know it's meant to be funny, but I don't think we should > promote a story of _internal_ conflict. If it's going to go with the Star > Wars theme, we should all be the "rebels" together. > > There are also a lot of grammar and language errors. I know that we have a > global contributor base and English isn't everyone's first language, but > for > an official video, we should make sure it is polished. > > > > -- > Matthew Miller ☁☁☁ Fedora Cloud Architect ☁☁☁ > <mattdm@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> > -- Regards Nitesh Narayan Lal -- marketing mailing list marketing@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing