Sure I will make that change . Thanks On 5/2/13, Roger Sinel <roger.sinel@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > I thought the music was fine. I think the first sentance should be "I want > to cont........." and not "I will contr....." it's confusing with "I > will.....". > The bubble text is to small to read on a smart phone at normal 30-40cm > distance. > Apart from that it's great, useful and to the point. Good effort. > > /Roger > On 2 May 2013 17:01, "mario juliano grande balletta" < > chanchito@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > >> Thank you for video effort, it is helpful and has a useful theme, >> however, >> the music left me with a confusing impression, as it did not exactly fit >> the theme. >> >> You might either record the sound bites and synchronize the animation, or >> perhaps choose music that seems more relevant and not sad, emotional, or >> melancholy, less dramatic for a technical/business theme. >> >> Apologies for the criticism, only trying to be helpful and honest, please >> do not be offended as I am not a multimedia expert and not a >> designer/artist, only an observer. >> >> Thanks again for the work and efforts! Much appreciated! >> >> On Thu, May 2, 2013 at 8:12 AM, nitesh narayan lal < >> niteshnarayanlalleo@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: >> >>> Hi all, >>> Few days back I had made a small video about Fedora Join. >>> You can get the video on https://vimeo.com/64942108 . >>> It will ask for password as its not public (Password:niteshfedorajoin) >>> Please feel free to share your views and suggestions about the same . >>> Regards >>> Nitesh Narayan Lal >>> -- >>> marketing mailing list >>> marketing@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx >>> https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing >> >> >> >> -- >> marketing mailing list >> marketing@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx >> https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing >> > -- Regards Nitesh Narayan Lal -- marketing mailing list marketing@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing
