The link to the F14 feature list is dead - is this something we are expecting to populate over the next day? If not, we should remove it. On 5/24/10, Paul W. Frields <stickster@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > On Tue, May 25, 2010 at 02:30:55AM +0530, Rahul Sundaram wrote: >> On 05/25/2010 01:44 AM, Mel Chua wrote: >> > We did it, everyone - take a look at the F13 column in >> > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Marketing#Release_deliverables, and be >> > very, very proud. >> > >> >> I did some changes to the Fedora 13 announcement at >> >> https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Fedora_13_announcement >> >> I would appreciate someone going through those changes carefully and >> applying their editorial skills to them. > > We really need to slim this announcement down. Every release, as the > final days approach, the text gets longer and longer. I'm concerned > that makes it increasingly unlikely to be read in its entirety. As > is, the document's not really suitable for emailing on a general list, > which means it's not functioning well as an announcement. > > I'll edit down some of the text, but we really need to make more of an > effort to significantly differentiate this announcement from the > release notes and the one page release notes. > > -- > Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/ > gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 > http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ > Where open source multiplies: http://opensource.com > -- > marketing mailing list > marketing@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing > -- Sent from my mobile device -- marketing mailing list marketing@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing
