I made some edits to the talking points: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Fedora_13_Talking_Points The vast majority of the edits were just stylistic in nature, mostly to make language more concise. However, I did make a couple substantive changes: * Combined the SystemTap static probes and Python debugging points, at the suggestion of Dave Malcolm. Dave's the engineer who's been involved in the latter at least and certainly understands the former. * Fixed the Authconfig UI/SSSD talking point to concentrate on the latter half. It's not clear whether the authconfig UI changes will be completed by F13, and they aren't required to do so by the feature completion plan. So I've added soem explanatory text there that leaves the door open. I made these changes in the role of a fellow Marketing contributor, so no one should take them as dictatorial. :-) -- Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/ gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ Where open source multiplies: http://opensource.com -- marketing mailing list marketing@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing
