Hy, here are my 0,02Cents... > Here's a paragraph that can be used or tweaked for press materials. > Bounce back suggested fixes, thanks! > > <para> > > On the Friday of SCALE 8x special events, Fedora Project contributors > are conducting a Fedora Activity Day (FAD). The focus of this FAD is > preparing the Fedora Project/JBoss.org joint mentoring organization > for the upcoming 2010 Google Summer of Code. The team plans to create > process and how-to content, find and solve mentor problems, and > educate the wider JBoss.org and Fedora projects about how > participation is conducted this year. The work prepares the > organizations for the goal of improving capacity for more students and > mentors. > > </para> > Sounds good. Is it possible to include some persons names or write it a bit more personal like "The team around Karsten Wade [and XYZ], a Redhat Worker and Fedora Enthusiast, plans to create process [...]". Also I think thats a small snippet on what is going on on SCALE and the text can focus in one other paragraph a bit deeper at the point what Redhat/JBoss/Fedora can do for Organisations (because it was mentioned in the sentence "The work prepares the organisations [...] <-- wich ones?]. best regards Henrik Heigl - wonderer @ fedoraproject.org freedom | friends | feature | first -- marketing mailing list marketing@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing
