On Wed, Mar 25, 2009 at 08:14:32PM +0100, Steven Moix wrote: > On Wed, 2009-03-25 at 19:57 +0100, Marcus Moeller wrote: > > Good Evening, > > > > >> I just created > > >> https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Fedora_11_beta_release_announcment which is > > > > I am not really sure, but should'nt it be called announcement instead > > of announcment? > > Typo, but the page isn't valid anyways, use the one linked by Paul That page is here, for those who missed it: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/F11_Beta_Announcement The Docs team worked on this last night, as announced for their meeting, and made many changes. Steven, you'll note that the lead-in has been changed so hopefully it doesn't come off strangely now. Also we used some pull quotes from different reviews to bolster the statements. The default talking points have been matched across the announcement from the work the Marketing team has done, so the top bullets agree across all the different work going on for feature presentation. The Docs team will be notifying everyone shortly. -- Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/ gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ irc.freenode.net: stickster @ #fedora-docs, #fedora-devel, #fredlug
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