Hi vidur,
Greetings
Once you are through your presentation, If can help you with corrections and editing.And I suggest you to keep the major details such as the introduction objectives very crisp and clear.In my view point you need to shuffle your order of contents..I mean, Comp b/w linux and win should follow the objective.And the benefits are actually a part of your "Why use Fedora".Try to avoid redundancy.Use attractive sideheadings as the govt offices generally pay heed to appearance as compared to the content comparatively.
good luck..If I may b of any help 2 u, feel free to drop me a mail.
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Regards
Sriram :-)
Greetings
Once you are through your presentation, If can help you with corrections and editing.And I suggest you to keep the major details such as the introduction objectives very crisp and clear.In my view point you need to shuffle your order of contents..I mean, Comp b/w linux and win should follow the objective.And the benefits are actually a part of your "Why use Fedora".Try to avoid redundancy.Use attractive sideheadings as the govt offices generally pay heed to appearance as compared to the content comparatively.
good luck..If I may b of any help 2 u, feel free to drop me a mail.
2008/8/7 Vidur Mittal <vidurmittal@xxxxxxxxx>
--HI,
I am trying to give presentation of FEDORA to few of the govt. deptt.. I am trying to make a presentation over fedora i want all the team to come forward and help in this regards.The points which i am thinking to include in presentation are as follows:
1. Objective
2. Benefits
3.Comparison between Windows and Linux
4.Comparison between different flavour of Unix
5.Why use fedora
6.A short introduction of redhat and fedora project
7.Help and support of fedora.
Now i want every one to come and help me in this regards so that i can complete the presentation. Please also guide me that i have included all the point for the presentation.
Thanks in advance
With Best Regards
Vidur Mittal
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