I have one small suggestion. and then an even smaller
suggestion/comment. :)
1) after the word 'release' in that middle paragraph, i think you meant
a comma to separate and not a period
now, for a very tiny, subjective comment that you can totally ignore if
you want to:
2) perhaps we ditch the exclamation after release party in the very top
title?
there are two other exlamations in the flyer already (one after the tag
line and then another one after contest), so i feel like the title one
might could go. that way, it's the Fedora 9 Release Party (sort of the
title of the event)
and we're exclaiming the come join! part and the contest! part
cheers,
mt
Máirín Duffy wrote:
Jeffrey Tadlock wrote:
Pretty bad, isn't it? So, show me what you can do. Work up a flyer
that looks better than my attempt so Fedora can have a decent looking
Release Party announcement flyer - I set the bar pretty low!
What do you think?
http://people.redhat.com/duffy/misc/blah/
~m
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