On Wed, 2007-11-07 at 18:21 -0500, Michael Beckwith wrote: > This is a mass preliminary e-mail to three mailing lists. > > What I have done so far with the marketing PDF is get the content and > images laid out and desiring feedback for it at this stage. After I get > some technical critique and suggestions, I'll go ahead and work on > visual presentation. > > Some notes that I have that I have seen is: > > -a need to seperate some of the feature paragraphs with a line or some > sort of visual blockage so people know where to stop. > -locate where "word divisions" is so that the justification of the text > doesn't string out so much of the words in some areas. > -decorate and also fill the 9th page with technical information. > -find some image to use on the 1st page at the top. A header is needed. > > latest PDF: http://tw2113.fedorapeople.org/fed_overview/11-7.pdf > tarball with all files: > http://tw2113.fedorapeople.org/fed_overview/F8-Press-Release.tar.gz > I agree with your points above but I would add a picture of a few more bits. Like eclipse. Maybe around the pictures but extra spaces and put a subtitle under each one. Cheers, Marc -- Fedora-marketing-list mailing list Fedora-marketing-list@xxxxxxxxxx https://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-marketing-list
