Re: commonbugs draft text for bug 1170803

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On Dec 8, 2014 2:27 PM, "Chris Murphy" <lists@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
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> Let me know if there's a preferred way of doing this.
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> https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=1170803#c21
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> Chris Murphy
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I like to get the expected behavior up front, then explain the ramifications.  Maybe it helps people who are just skimming retain the info. ie:

"To make sure any extN filesystems that might be reused or resized are healthy, the Fedora installer automatically  performs a check on filesystems it discovers.  If this check takes a long time, perhaps because of large, slow, or damaged filesystems, the installer may..."

Anyway, everyone has their own writing style.  Your copy is clear and concise.

Or, are you asking for it to be included in the RNs?

--Pete

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