Good thorough job that Roger has done. He is to be congratulated.
May I make two (only two, he writes well) suggestions?
6. Multiboot on BIOS Systems
Alternative title 6 Multiboot on systems based on BIOS startup code7. Multiboot on UEFI Systems
Alternative title 7 Multiboot on systems based on UEFI startup code
Regards
Leslie
Leslie
Mr. Leslie Satenstein
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From: Pete Travis <me@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
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Sent: Saturday, October 4, 2014 3:30 PM
Subject: gut check - Fedora Multiboot Guide
Hey Adam,
I've been working with Roger, a new Fedora Docs contributor, on a
Fedora Multiboot Guide[1].
Although the work definitely needs to be structured, there is a solid
draft now, and your expertise would really be appreciated. Would you
please skim it over for glaring misconceptions or omissions?
[1] https://fedorapeople.org/groups/docs/multiboot-guide/
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