-----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- Hash: SHA512 On Wed, Oct 16, 2013 at 06:21:46PM -0700, Leslie S Satenstein wrote: > Hi Pete, > Well, I took my trusty LibreOfficewriter and did a markup of the aforementioned first draft. To the group, please review my comments. The changes may appear trivial, but they are to make the document more precise and more readable. When will you be making these changes to the wiki (where the source lives)[0]? > In case the attachment is stripped due to email processing, here it is inline. Sorry to do the attachment inline. I did not want to file a bugzilla report . Changes or comments are in yellow. There's no need to put this in an email or file a bugzilla ticket. The source lives in the wiki and is there as a means of collaborating. Please make your changes there. [0] https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/F20_Beta_release_announcement - --Eric - -------------------------------------------------- Eric "Sparks" Christensen Fedora Project sparks@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx - sparks@xxxxxxxxxx 097C 82C3 52DF C64A 50C2 E3A3 8076 ABDE 024B B3D1 - -------------------------------------------------- -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.14 (GNU/Linux) iQGcBAEBCgAGBQJSX+GQAAoJEB/kgVGp2CYvuesL/joGfmEfTyNtGZup5fzgXRZH eX/mYYI1eGPmwxaJu4tsHG+ruQNr+LraZJyuWFFiy6TwLXQdcSUMXtOauKSCSniT n7n3/6Ek3jYyAKi+xYPCXJKOUQdHMvUpiKcmPIffUgiZ7tkigYtnhqrIXr7s55Tf HODDJlRabb62n9YzKIoQVzbQXbOo3qVuVpzVYT19AqFhnQiqXo49Os1p6lAZ9c08 JKOVTaHwgNR1ZQ5q3OAj+T20dX+oDHHXS05Ok3rqgy5169PFzQWbv85P0yFvQlqW R7PLCYEujWMIyzkYaurOJ5J/W1Gv3LT6CmXpS5xlOefXMlJqWDi+BcWdif78mgbY psrYueCIws/IlvB07Q+EP8WJahMYhrblwrVAd7jyDPXvVkovrtRKDqS3Th894qy/ t6B1OxGTfQbPm2jvzVLCf8BhVXRiqM5CtfhZ33VGes7ONClG40FuoLHSoT9qfnTu m8JlmbzeByE+nzWd/HAU0KvHXtL4r4geAmGLwrJQJQ== =l9v/ -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- -- docs mailing list docs@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe: https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/docs
