Some touchups for Fedora 20 Web page

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http://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/Fedora/19/html/Installation_Guide/s1-pkgselection-x86.html

has a section that reads

9.10. Software Selection

Installing in text mode

If you install Fedora in text mode, you cannot make package selections. The installer automatically selects packages only from the base and core groups. These packages are sufficient to ensure that the system is operational at the end of the installation process, ready to install updates and new packages. To change the package selection, complete the installation, then use the Add/Remove Software application to make desired changes.


I would for precision change the first sentence to read.
If you install Fedora in text mode, you cannot select packages to install. 

Justification. Even though the word select will occur twice, in the first lines, it is what a person does, he selects.

I know it is nit picking, but that is what proof reading and editing is about.

 Leslie
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