I have corrected and revised the English F19 release notes. Up to the end of section 3. There is an attachment to Bugzilla. which is the new text following corrections.
The original is still on the website in English
Here is what I have modified. (refer to attachment)
The original is still on the website in English
Here is what I have modified. (refer to attachment)
Regards
Leslie
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Mr. Leslie Satenstein
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Yesterday was a good day, today is a better day,
and tomorrow will be even better.
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From: Jérôme Fenal <jfenal@xxxxxxxxx>
To: immanetize@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx; For participants of the Documentation Project <docs@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Sent: Tuesday, May 14, 2013 5:15 PM
Subject: Re: Release Notes available for Review
2013/5/14 Pete Travis <me@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>:
> The work on the Release Notes so far has been posted to
> http://fedorapeople.org/groups/docs/release-notes/ for review. If you
> have a chance, please look it over for technical errors and grammatical
> flops.
Hi,
Spotted typos during translation to French:
In database_servers:
- Apache <package>Derby</package>, an open source relational database
**impelmented** entirely
--> implemented
- If required, the original MySQL packages are still available as
<filename>community-mysql</filename>.
--> should the tag be <filename> or <package>?
Multimedia:
To comply with XDG Base ***Direcotry*** specifications...
Productivity:
<function>xargs</function>, <function>printf</function> and regex functions.
--> <function>xargs</function>, <function>printf</function> and
<function>regex</function> functions.
sed... to separate lines by **ACII** NULL characters
--> ASCII NUL (both terms to modify)?
Virtualization:
Changes with <productname>OpenShift Grizzly</productname>
--> Should be Openstack...
Ceilomeer
--> Ceilometer
Snapshots can done to block devices as well as
--> can *be* done
That a first review of what is currently being translated in French
for the release notes. Expect more to come.
Regards,
J.
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