Within our documentation, we do not like to over use the word "see" as this can be an uncomfortable reminder to visually impaired readers. It is especially challenging in the Release Notes as almost every other paragraph tends to refer the reader to an external link. The result is paragraph after paragraph of "for details see ..." or "for more information see ...". Instead of "see", it is preferable to use terms like "refer to", "may be found at" or other terms that do not imply a particular way of reading. When referencing some user-visible change, exchange terms like "users will see improved performance" for phrases like "users will notice improved performance". Simply being alert to this also helps make the prose a little less repetitive. Thanks --McD -- docs mailing list docs@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe: https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/docs
