First I apologize for the big patch, new to git and learning. These are
just some miscellaneous changes peripherally related to some bz's filed
against the installation guide. Thanks in advance for feedback.
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From 1d2781ad6bcacf91a3c60c1395cc285fb41c75eb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jason Taylor <jmtaylor@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> Date: Tue, 13 Jul 2010 18:46:38 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] Some formatting and clarity changes --- en-US/Graphical_Installation_x86_Starting.xml | 8 +++++--- en-US/Preparing-common-title-1.xml | 7 +++++++ en-US/Steps_Network_Install-x86.xml | 4 ++-- en-US/adminoptions.xml | 8 ++++++++ 4 files changed, 22 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) create mode 100644 en-US/Preparing-common-title-1.xml diff --git a/en-US/Graphical_Installation_x86_Starting.xml b/en-US/Graphical_Installation_x86_Starting.xml index b28ee2d..6918481 100644 --- a/en-US/Graphical_Installation_x86_Starting.xml +++ b/en-US/Graphical_Installation_x86_Starting.xml @@ -86,7 +86,8 @@ <para> After a short delay, a screen containing boot options appears.<!-- the RHEL <prompt>boot:</prompt> prompt should appear. The screen contains information on a variety of boot options. Each boot option also has one or more help screens associated with it. To access a help screen, press the appropriate function key as listed in the line at the bottom of the screen.--> </para> - + +<!-- This information is no longer accurate at least since F13 <para> As you boot the installation program, be aware of two issues: </para> @@ -97,7 +98,8 @@ Once the <prompt>boot:</prompt> prompt appears, the installation program automatically begins if you take no action within the first minute. To disable this feature, press one of the help screen function keys. </para> </listitem> - +--> + <itemizedlist> <listitem> <para> If you press a help screen function key, there is a slight delay while the help screen is read from the boot media. @@ -154,7 +156,7 @@ <primary>boot options</primary> <secondary>text mode</secondary> </indexterm> - To perform a text mode installation, at the installation boot prompt, type: + To perform a text mode installation, at the installation menu press <keycap>Esc</keycap> which produces a <prompt>boot:</prompt> prompt, type: </para> <screen> <userinput>linux text</userinput> diff --git a/en-US/Preparing-common-title-1.xml b/en-US/Preparing-common-title-1.xml new file mode 100644 index 0000000..816b376 --- /dev/null +++ b/en-US/Preparing-common-title-1.xml @@ -0,0 +1,7 @@ +<?xml version="1.0"?> +<!DOCTYPE section PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.3//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.3/docbookx.dtd"; [ +]> + +<title> + Preparing for Installation +</title> diff --git a/en-US/Steps_Network_Install-x86.xml b/en-US/Steps_Network_Install-x86.xml index 636c5f5..1ba8f63 100644 --- a/en-US/Steps_Network_Install-x86.xml +++ b/en-US/Steps_Network_Install-x86.xml @@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ </para> <para> - To copy the files from the installation DVD or CD-ROMs to a Linux instance, which acts as an installation staging server, continue with either <xref linkend="s1-steps-network-installs-x86-ftp-http"/> or LINKMEÂ Preparing for an NFS installation. + To copy the files from the installation DVD or CD-ROMs to a Linux instance, which acts as an installation staging server, continue with either <!-- <xref linkend="s1-steps-network-installs-x86-ftp-http"/> --> or LINKMEÂ Preparing for an NFS installation. </para> <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; href="Steps_Network_Install_x86_ppc_s390_section_1.xml"/> @@ -81,4 +81,4 @@ <!-- Preparing for an NFS install --> -</section> \ No newline at end of file +</section> diff --git a/en-US/adminoptions.xml b/en-US/adminoptions.xml index 67db021..a009e87 100644 --- a/en-US/adminoptions.xml +++ b/en-US/adminoptions.xml @@ -14,10 +14,18 @@ <prompt>boot:</prompt> prompt. </para> + +<note> + <title>boot: prompt</title> +<para>The <prompt>boot:</prompt> prompt can be accessed from the install media's initial menu by pressing <keycap>Esc</keycap>. +</para> +</note> + <para> If you specify more than one option, separate each of the options by a single space. For example: </para> + <screen><userinput>linux <replaceable>option1</replaceable> <replaceable>option2</replaceable> <replaceable>option3</replaceable></userinput> </screen> <note> -- 1.7.1.1
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