Re: User Guide - update

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Good Day Susan,
i've re-read the NM finding only one minor detail to review: in the
moddle of the fisrt <para> there is a phrase ending with 
"and new in Fedora 13 also mobile broadband." 

I would remove "new in Fedora 13" 

or insert at the end 

"with extended support for Bluetooth DUN"

Regards
Luigi


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