Good Day Susan, i've re-read the NM finding only one minor detail to review: in the moddle of the fisrt <para> there is a phrase ending with "and new in Fedora 13 also mobile broadband." I would remove "new in Fedora 13" or insert at the end "with extended support for Bluetooth DUN" Regards Luigi
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