On Mon, Nov 16, 2009 at 11:42:32PM -0500, Eric Christensen wrote: > On Tue, 2009-11-17 at 06:43 +0530, Rahul Sundaram wrote: > > On 11/17/2009 06:31 AM, Paul W. Frields wrote: > > > I'll be using the text found here for tomorrow's announcement to > > > fedora-announce-list: > > > > > > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Fedora_12_Announcement > > > > > > I noticed we've dropped our old legacy habit of producing a humorous > > > preface, in favor of a more cut and dried approach. I'll likely > > > precede the text with a short (promise!) thank-you note and a URL for > > > http://get.fedoraproject.org at the top, for people who want to cut to > > > the chase. > > > > > > Thanks to everyone who worked on the announcement text. > > > > I just realized that I didn't actually discuss that choice. I thought > > our Fedora 12 Beta announcement got good reactions and wanted to just > > improve on that with minor tweaks rather than use the humour approach. > > Hope that is ok with everyone. > > > > Rahul > > > > Works for me. I was just happy that someone had tweaked it for > final! :) I just went through and did a final once-over for grammar/style tweaks. I'm now copying it for posting to the list. -- Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/ gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ irc.freenode.net: stickster @ #fedora-docs, #fedora-devel, #fredlug -- fedora-docs-list mailing list fedora-docs-list@xxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe: https://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-docs-list
