The PackageKit chapter of the Fedora 12 Deployment Guide is in final
draft stage. The fine-pick comb has already been applied. Only
content corrections should be applied at this point. Thanks to
Richard Hughes, Rahul Sundaram, Rahul Kavalapara for their helpful
2nd draft reviews and suggestions
Notable changes:
* addition of a short discussion on, and screenshot of, the Software
Update Preferences window, for setting update-checking intervals.
(Rahul Kavalapara pointed out this omission--thanks!)
* all screenshots now correct; all but three have "Figure X:
description" captions
* entire chapter now formatted (i.e. the bold has been applied)
Review and feedback on this chapter is still welcome.
For details on how to get involved in the Fedora 12 Deployment Guide
update, see the project page (and join the mailing list) at:
https://fedorahosted.org/deploymentguide/
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Douglas Silas
Technical Writer | Red Hat, Inc.
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