On Mon, Aug 03, 2009 at 03:04:20PM -0400, Eric Christensen wrote: > On Mon, Aug 3, 2009 at 15:01, Richard Fontana<rfontana@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > On Mon, 3 Aug 2009 14:46:44 -0400 > > Eric Christensen <eric@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > > >> So I'm concentrating on that first paragraph, second sentence only. > >> So we should make it: > >> > >> Copyright © 2008 Red Hat, Inc. This material may only be distributed > >> subject to the terms and conditions set forth in a Creative Commons > >> Attribution-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported license, (the latest version is > >> presently available at > >> http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/). > > > > That's the sentence I was recommending should be changed, because the > > existing language is derived from the now-disfavored OPL -- since you're > > going to be changing the sentence anyway to change the license > > reference. > > > > - RF > > So you like how I changed it? > I thought this was the "correct" way: """ Copyright © 2009 Red Hat, Inc and others. This material is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 3.0 Unported License. """ ... with a link surrounding [Creative .. License] to http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/. -- Ian Weller <ian@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> "Why, a four-year-old could understand this report. Find me a four-year-old child. I can't make head or tail out of it." -- Groucho Marx, "Duck Soup"
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