On Tue, 2008-11-04 at 05:06 -0500, Karsten Wade wrote: > And so it is. Adam, thanks for the great work. I edited, tweaked a bit, added URLs, pruned, and reduced to only two exclamation points. Hopefully you find that emphasized the quality of the work by removing diluting content. :) > > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Cambridge_(F-10)_Preview_Release_announcement > > "Test pre-release? No, way, we _taste_ pre-releases." > > How does everyone like this "final" version? Ready to: Looks good to me! Only suggestion I have, reflecting something Paul pointed out earlier, is to reduce/remove the word "smell". So in the line > Doesn't it smell yummy? We know you can't resist, and we don't want > you to. Perhaps we should change it to say "Doesn't it look yummy?". Also, with all the nice new links tossed in, the "(http://bugzilla.redhat.com) link in the bug section might be redundant. Removing it might make things look/flow a little better there. But both of these are nit picks, and I'm +1 with or without them. - Adam -- fedora-docs-list mailing list fedora-docs-list@xxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe: https://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-docs-list
