#32: Probable typos in the F10 preview release notes
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Reporter: runab | Owner: quaid
Type: defect | Status: new
Priority: minor | Milestone:
Component: Content | Version: 10
Keywords: |
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The following strings probably contain some minor typos:
string # 43:
"All of the packages from a DVD install can occupy over 9 GB of disk
space.
The final install size is determined by the installing spin and the
packages
selected during installation. Additional disk space is required during
installation to support the installation environment. The additional disk
space corresponds to the size of /Fedora/base/stage2.img plus the size of
the files in /var/lib/rpm on the installed system."
probable correction:
"filename" tags missing for "/Fedora/base/stage2.img" and "/var/lib/rpm".
Ref: string 32 and 321
string # 437:
"There is no support for Xen or kdump for the PowerPC architecture in
Fedora.
32-bit PowerPC does still have a separate SMP kernel."
probable correction:
"32-bit PowerPC does still have a separate SMP kernel." => "32-bit PowerPC
still has a separate SMP kernel."
string # 581:
"indhi" => should be "Sindhi"
string # 993:
"<ulink url=\"http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/ThomasCanniot\";>
ThomasCanniot</
ulink> (translator - French)"
correction: A space missing between "Thomas" and "Canniot"
Thanks
Runa
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Ticket URL: <https://fedorahosted.org/release-notes/ticket/32>
Fedora Release Notes <https://fedorahosted.org/release-notes/>
Fedora Release Notes
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