#1: Chapter 1 update
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Reporter: quaid | Owner: ke4qqq
Type: enhancement | Status: new
Priority: minor | Milestone: RC-ready
Component: Content | Version: 10.0.0
Resolution: | Keywords:
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Changes (by eawest):
* priority: major => minor
* type: task => enhancement
Comment:
Recommend change in first paragraph, third sentence from
'''"The installation system is flexible enough to use even if you have no
previous knowledge of Linux or computer networks."'''
to
'''"The installation system is easy to use even if you lack previous
knowledge of Linux or computer networks."'''
Explanation: Sentence's position in the middle of the paragraph is not
great for such a lengthy sentence when the message is simple "This is
easy, even for novices." Removing just those two words makes the sentence
more succinct and easy to understand for the reader.
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Ticket URL: <https://fedorahosted.org/install-guide/ticket/1#comment:3>
Fedora Installation Guide <https://fedorahosted.org/install-guide/>
Fedora Documentation - Installation Guide
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