I merged my changes into chapter 3. Chapter 2 looks good to me. I added one section to the end of chapter 3 to talk about setting up an updates stretegy. It sounds too awkward though, so if you plan on talking about it in the other chapters, it might be better to just take it back out. On Tue, Apr 29, 2008 at 6:10 PM, Eric Christensen <eric@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > -----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- > Ha have to sh: SHA1 > > Keith, > Sounds good. Just post when you have them back on the wiki. > > > Thanks, > Eric > > > > Keith Henkell wrote: > > | I copied chapters 2 and 3 for editing offline. I should be able to > | copy any changes back up in 2-3 hours. > | > | > | > | On 4/29/08, Keith Henkell <keith@xxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > |> I'll take a look at it tonight. Is this staying in the wiki for now? > |> > |> > |> > |> On 4/29/08, Eric H Christensen <eric@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > |>> I think Chapters 1-3 in the Security Guide [1] are ready for review and > |>> editing. Chapter 4 is getting close to being ready and Chapter 4.1 > [2] is > |>> already over on the final side. As soon as I get a little more time I > |> hope > |>> to have Chapter 4 ready for review (later tonight?). > |>> > |>> If someone can take a look at what I have I'd appreciate it greatly! > |> Trying > |>> to get this ready before F9. > |>> > |>> Eric > |>> > |>> > |>> [1] http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Drafts/CryptoGuide > |>> [2] http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Security_Guide/9/LUKSDiskEncryption > |>> > |>> -- > |>> fedora-docs-list mailing list > |>> fedora-docs-list@xxxxxxxxxx > |>> To unsubscribe: > |>> https://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-docs-list > |>> > | > -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- > Version: GnuPG v1.4.7 (GNU/Linux) > Comment: Using GnuPG with Fedora - http://enigmail.mozdev.org > > iD8DBQFIF5zOL5V8yddJCO0RAq0VAJwMIjFE48+wHi+WA4ALRANBUm5VpwCfSC7M > H9I68umCNxOrLvFPReXxBDI= > =mTec > -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- > > -- > > fedora-docs-list mailing list > fedora-docs-list@xxxxxxxxxx > To unsubscribe: https://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-docs-list > -- fedora-docs-list mailing list fedora-docs-list@xxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe: https://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-docs-list
