Hey Eric, I took a quick flip through the docs and they look/read well. One thing I found a bit confusing was in Chapter 3. You go over each partition and give a little info as why you handle it the way you do. At the end of the paragraph is an italics word or phrase. I figured out that the word or phrase is the reasoning behind your selection/handling, but it was a little confusing. I'm not sure if those are author notes, or if they are meant to be in the finished document. Under the assumption that you wanted them in the finished document, I went ahead and took a whack at including them in a way I thought was more clear. Also, the /tmp partition section doesn't have a "reasoning" so someone would need to add one there. To the best of my knowledge I did everything as one change, so you should be able to revert easily if I overstepped any bounds. - Adam On Tue, 2008-04-29 at 15:42 -0400, Eric H Christensen wrote: > I think Chapters 1-3 in the Security Guide [1] are ready for review and editing. Chapter 4 is getting close to being ready and Chapter 4.1 [2] is already over on the final side. As soon as I get a little more time I hope to have Chapter 4 ready for review (later tonight?). > > If someone can take a look at what I have I'd appreciate it greatly! Trying to get this ready before F9. > > Eric > > > [1] http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Drafts/CryptoGuide > [2] http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Security_Guide/9/LUKSDiskEncryption > -- fedora-docs-list mailing list fedora-docs-list@xxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe: https://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-docs-list
