On Dec 31, 2007 4:08 AM, Rahul Sundaram <sundaram@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > Timothy Murphy wrote: > > Rahul Sundaram wrote: > > > >> Finally did a quick rewrite of the overview page that I have been > >> wanting to do for a while now. Appreciate a review and additional content. > >> > >> http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Overview > > > > I found it interesting and informative. > > But I didn't understand the section on Upstream Focus, > > "Fedora Project has a strong focus > > on not deviating from upstream as much as possible > > in all the different software it includes in the repository", > > until I read the link provided, when it became clear. > > > > But if the document is intended for non-gurus, > > it might be worth re-wording this bit. > > Something like, "Fedora tries to follow the development of packages > > as closely as possible, only adding its own patches > > where this is essential." > > Fixed. Thanks. > Rahul: I copied what you did and performed a fairly large rewrite - the result of being an obsessive-compulsive word-hacker. It's at http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/JohnBabich/Overview. Use whatever you like. Best Regards, John Babich Hacker of the Written Word -- fedora-docs-list mailing list fedora-docs-list@xxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe: https://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-docs-list
