Hi,
Had a look over the above document on the F7t3 dvd iso, and felt it
could use some additions {other than FC6 -> F7} which seems to be
handled by some macros.
http://cvs.fedora.redhat.com/viewcvs/
readme-burning-isos/devel/en_US/README-BURNING-ISOS.xml?root=docs&rev=1.3&view=markup
I'm not part of the cvsl10n group so if the cvs tree is still open
before translation begins perhaps someone can check and commit ;) {I
couldn't find the doc anywhere on the wiki, so assuming it's a cvs thing}.
DaveT.
--- README-BURNING-ISOS.xml.1.3 2007-04-02 22:20:09.000000000 +1000
+++ README-BURNING-ISOS.xml 2007-04-03 01:15:58.000000000 +1000
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
<para>
&DISTRO; is distributed on multiple CD-sized ISO image files,
or a single DVD-sized ISO image file. You can use the single DVD
- ISO file if your computer meets the following requirements:
+ ISO file if your computer meets both the following requirements:
</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
<para>
- You may also need the <code>SHA1SUM</code> file to verify that
+ You should also download the <code>SHA1SUM</code> file to verify that
the files you have downloaded are complete and correct.
</para>
</section>
@@ -248,16 +248,17 @@
The <filename>sha1sum.exe</filename> program computes and
displays hashes. To use it, save
<filename>sha1sum.exe</filename> to the same directory as the
- ISO files. Select <guilabel>Run...</guilabel> from the Start
- menu and then enter <userinput>cmd</userinput> for the name of
+ ISO files and the SHA1SUM file. Select <guilabel>Run...</guilabel> from the
+ Start menu and then enter <userinput>cmd</userinput> for the name of
the program to start a <application>Command Prompt</application>
window. Then change into the download directory. Run
<command>sha1sum</command> with each ISO file like this:
</para>
<screen>cd "C:\Documents and Settings\Owner\My Documents\My Downloads\&DISTRO;"
-sha1sum.exe &FCXVERSPIN;-i386-disc1.iso</screen>
+sha1sum.exe &FCXVERSPIN;-i386-*.iso
+type SHA1SUM | find *.iso</screen>
<para>
- The program takes some time to complete, since it must read the
+ The program takes some minutes to complete, since it must read the
entire ISO file.
</para>
<para>
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