Replace misspelled "ompletely" with "completely", in first paragraph. In gameplay, "one" should be replaced with "once". Comma, not period, after "extra life. Silver balls..." Nice layout, good commentary. Thanks, Bob Bevill -----Original Message----- From: fedora-docs-list-bounces@xxxxxxxxxx [mailto:fedora-docs-list-bounces@xxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Adam Moreland Sent: Friday, June 23, 2006 12:13 PM To: fedora-docs-list@xxxxxxxxxx Subject: Fedora Gaming Writings: Supertux Hey Hugo and all, I have finished working on supertux. can someone just review this and see if the format is what you were looking for. I have kept to the template, and it needs just looking at, to double check for errors. http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Games/supertux Hope it looks good. obrigado! Mr Adam L Moreland (MAniX) | Registered Linux User: #417406 BA (Hons) Media Studies, 2nd Year, UoN **** System: Pentium 4 SKT478 2.8GHz Precott, AMD Athlon XP-M 2800+ | GPG Key: AC230C32 **** pub 1024D/AC230C32 2006-05-21 Key fingerprint = 14F4 50F5 806C 25A5 B33C C2BF 982C 87B7 AC23 0C32 uid Adam Moreland (MAniX) sub 2048g/A471FCE7 2006-05-21 **** >From: Hugo Cisneiros <hugo@xxxxxxxxxxxx> >Reply-To: For participants of the Documentation Project ><fedora-docs-list@xxxxxxxxxx> >To: For participants of the Documentation Project ><fedora-docs-list@xxxxxxxxxx> >Subject: Re: Fedora Gaming Writings: neverputt >Date: Fri, 23 Jun 2006 10:28:29 -0300 > _________________________________________________________________ The new MSN Search Toolbar now includes Desktop search! http://join.msn.com/toolbar/overview -- fedora-docs-list@xxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe: https://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-docs-list
