On Fri, Nov 19, 2004 at 12:49:20PM -0800, Karsten Wade wrote:
> On Thu, 2004-11-18 at 16:54, David Malcolm wrote:
> > On Thu, 2004-11-18 at 16:26 -0800, Karsten Wade wrote:
>
> > > cd /home/kwade/Documents/projects/fedora/fedora-docs/selinux-apache/
> > > nsgmls -wxml -s /home/kwade/lib/psgmlx-0.5/lib/xml.dcl
> > > selinux-apache-en.xml
> > > nsgmls:/home/kwade/lib/psgmlx-0.5/lib/xml.dcl:1:W: SGML declaration was
> > > not implied
> > >
> > > SGML validation finished at Thu Nov 18 16:24:42
> > >
> > > FWIW, that's the way it normally appears when I validate (in Emacs using
> > > C-c C-v).
> >
> > OK, great; good idea. Is xmllint happy with such a setup? If so, then
> > the ABOUT-DOC-EN probably _should_ get added to the main entities file.
>
> As far as I can tell, it works fine. I just ran xmllint against it
> (without options), with only FEDORA-ENTITIES-EN and the various
> PUBLISHED-HTML-URL etc. defined in a document, and it validates, builds,
> and does not error.
>
> > > > > > Any thoughts/rewrites? Perhaps the heading should read "About This
> > > > > > Document" instead?
> > > > >
> > > > > Yes, that is more of an accurate title. Changed that in the attachment.
> > > >
> > > > Perhaps the file should have a different name; perhaps
> > > > "about-this-document-en.xml" ?
> > >
> > > How about about-doc-en.xml?
> > Yes, that's much better.
> >
> > Maybe even "about-fedora-doc-en.xml", to make it clear that this relates
> > to a Fedora doc? (as opposed to RHEL)
>
> No need, everything is separate ... although it is not improper, and is
> certainly future proofing. Do as you wish, since I'm wishy-washy. :)
>
Since it is already part of a module called fedora-docs, adding fedora
to the filename is redundant.
> > Can I go ahead and commit this (assuming I have access rights)? Or
> > should someone else on the list comment first? I'm just a lowly desktop
> > developer :-)
>
> Nah, youse a riter, now.
>
> I suggest you file a bug (RFE) against fedora-docs (tfox will get it,
> she has write perms and the buck-stops-here for stuff like what goes in
> fedora-docs/common), attach a patch to fedora-entities-en.xml, attach
> the about{-fedora}-doc-en.xml file. We'll also need to fix the
> fedora-docs/example-tutorial to include the new entity call(s) and
> sample definitions for the 4 entities required by
>
I saw your RFE. I think it is a great idea, like the name "About this
Document," and like the name about-doc-en.xml as the filename.
However, I think it would be better as a separate sect1 either at the
beginning or the end of the document. Tips are supposed to be shorter
pieces of information called out to help the reader accomplish a task.
I've seen many other documents with an About this Document section,
and they have always been separate sections.
Having a separate section also allows us to have a common place for
the "Acknowledgements" and "Revision History" sections under this
sect1 as sect2s.
Thoughts?
Tammy
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