On Sat, 23 Oct 2004 17:35:40 -0700 (PDT), "Rahul Sundaram" <rahulsundaram@xxxxxxxxxxx> said: > > Please ask the readers to check the relevant release > notes early There was a paragraph for this in the introduction, which I've now reworked to make the Release Notes more prominent. > http://www.se.clara.net/fedora/fedora-install-guide-en/s1-aborting-installation.html > > The above section might be better as a note I agree - this has now been moved to chapter 2 as a note. > http://www.se.clara.net/fedora/fedora-install-guide-en/s1-selinux.html > > Might be important to linux to the current fedora > selinux faq The targetted policy means that SELinux shouldn't interfere with anything other than the network services it locks down, so it ought to be invisible to most users. I wrote the text to read quickly with each section as self-contained as possible for those readers who just want to look up one item, so I would rather avoid putting external links in the main chapters, but see below... > Why havent you given the screenshots yet? The view was that we should get the text done, and then do all of the screenshots at once for consistency. So at the moment there are just placeholders where screenshots should be. >It might be worth it to write a faq and refer to that in this > guide There isn't an official FAQ at the moment, but there is an unofficial FAQ Website and couple of other very popular independent sites on the Web offering support. Building some kind of relationship between the various groups will be a big task - at the moment I don't think that the Fedora Project "officially" recognises or endorses any of these sites, so we can't really include links to them. On the other hand I think that the Installation Guide should provide a smooth progression for new users by suggesting how they might use their new system, and pointing them to other sources of information that are available. I have an idea about this, but it needs a bit more thought. -- Stuart Ellis s.ellis@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx