(note message id intentionally broke to start new thread) On Fri, 2004-08-27 at 16:33, Karsten Wade wrote: > For expediency, I'm prepared to just submit the patch to the Doc Guide, > rolling in some other dangling issues I can include. Tammy would see > the CVS report and can address any mistakes and expand/modify. Darn that cowboy mentality! For those who chomp at the bit, you can see that I am the same myself. The above is a perfect example. Even I get impatient at process, though I recognize we need it more than I need to feel comfortable. 1. I don't own the document, although Tammy said I could do some minor bugfixes and commit them to CVS. What I just wrote is a whole new <section> not a minor fix, so that requires a new bug for tracking work on the Documentation Guide: https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=131160 with an attachment of a diff against current CVS and then .... 2. An editor to look it over, which can be the first person who grabs it and confirms what I did, and who can then move it on to block bug # 129722 (ready to publish) for Tammy (in her role as a document owner) to pick up and commit to CVS, then (in the role of website maintainer) update f.r.c/participate/documentation-guide/. To make this easier, I have opted to host this as a DRAFT version at the following URL: http://people.redhat.com/kwade/patches/fedora-docs/documentation-guide-quaid/documentation-guide-en-quaid/taking-screenshots.html The editor will want to a) wordsmith, and b) check the technical details, such as steps and information shown. Also, a check of the DocBook XML is in order. Note thought that I broke rules from the Documentation Guide: 1. I used a meaningful ID for <sect1>, dropping the location and section specific information. At this point, the most legitimate debate is between "similar-to-title" and "s.similar.to.title", the latter being Norm Walsh's current usage. 2. My <screen> tags themselves are not flush left, although the content is. I think that information described on this page: http://fedora.redhat.com/participate/documentation-guide/s1-xml-tags-screen.html is a legacy SGML problem. My builds show that the following: <screen> foo </screen> <screen> foo </screen> <screen> foo </screen> renders as: foo foo foo Obviously the contents of the <screen/> are highly sensitive to whitespace issues, and in fact could perhaps be CDATA containers instead to totally make them ignored by the toolchain. Either way, I don't think the <screen> tags need to be flush left, nor the the <computeroutput/> container. I'd like to recommend this for a change in the Documentation Guide, and will file a bugzilla with patch if there is no technical objection. - Karsten, off to see Run Lola Run at http://www.thespoon.com/drivein/ -- Karsten Wade, RHCE, Tech Writer a lemon is just a melon in disguise http://people.redhat.com/kwade/ gpg fingerprint: 2680 DBFD D968 3141 0115 5F1B D992 0E06 AD0E 0C41