On Fri, 2004-04-02 at 13:14, Aaron Matteson wrote: > Thanks for all the feedback from the previous thread. I have inserted > what i thought was best and cleaned things up a bit. > > * I have left the man section in tact. Man I feel is still the majority > method of choice over info. Aaron, maybe mentioning info/pinfo as another manual parsing option would be useful? > > * Completed the introduction and the missing paragraphs at the beginning > of chapter 2. > > I feel the doc is now complete through chapter 3 but would gladly be > shown the errors of my ways :) > Spelling/grammar errors I found: * In Introduction: - "yield" spelt wrong - "exhausted" spelt wrong - "Number 1" should probably be "Number One". * Chapter 2: - section 2.1,1, "foremost" spelt wrong - "invoke" spelt wrong - section 2.1.2, "explanation" spelt wrong - section 2.2.1, "application" spelt wrong - section 2.2.2, phrase should be "people's trials" - section 2.2.3, "convenient" spelt wrong (thanks for linking to us!) - section 2.2.4, "Internet" spelt wrong (should be capital "I") Haven't checked the rest yet, but great work overall! :-) -- mhelios -- FedoraForum.org staff Registered Linux User #348963 / counter.li.org GnuPG KeyID: 0xCE9F8922 / gnupg.org
