On Tue, Feb 10, 2009 at 10:12:45AM +0100, Tim Niemueller wrote: > ryan lerch schrieb: > > Hi all, > > > > I have finished creating a mockup of the fedora 11 release notes [1] > > Design looks good, but... > > - Credit is good, but having the first HTML page only authors is a bit > much, then the legal notice and an abstract which tells you nothing that > you wouldn't know from the title... > - I'm missing a section that gives the really important stuff at a > glance. I'm often inclined to use external sources (journals, websites) > on a release to see the most important (and visible) new stuff. > > In short I'd like the first page to be a very rough overview of the > top-five or so new features and most noticeable changes (before any TOC, > abstract, legal notice), short, precise, and to the point. There's a release summary that's usually prepared on the wiki for this purpose. -- Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/ gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ irc.freenode.net: stickster @ #fedora-docs, #fedora-devel, #fredlug
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