On Wed, Nov 12, 2014 at 11:55:17AM -0500, Paul W. Frields wrote: > Hi WG folks, > > The following PNG contains the current text on the next-gen website. > This is material the Marketing and Websites teams and I worked on, > presented for your feedback.(*) > > https://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/images/workstation-page-201411121143.png > > There are several immediate questions for the WG to address: > > (1) Is the text description of the product acceptable? If not, > specifically what changes are needed to make it so? > > (2) Is the set of included features acceptable? If not, specifically > what changes are needed to make it so? > > > = = = > > (*) To see the work-in-progress site in action, follow this procedure: > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/How_to_fix_bugs_on_the_Fedora_Project_website > Specifically you'll want to git-checkout the 'getfedora' branch > and test the getfedora.org folder. Some notes about changes already solicited from the WG folks on IRC. In all cases we'll have matching text and screenshots -- no random non-matches. * s/Developers,// at the top blurb * Replace general GNOME placeholder with Inkscape/GIMP shot and supporting text "Create and enhance photos, diagrams, and other graphics with free apps like Inkscape and GIMP. Share your results with friends and collaborators." * Replace COPR placeholder with Devhelp/Glade shot and supporting text: "Fedora Workstation gives you a complete set of tools and documentation to create and deploy beautiful native apps." * Replace Docker placeholder with Terminals shot and supporting text: "Prefer the command line? All your favorite utilities are available in the Terminal. Edit and control your source to your heart's content." Also, the photos are being replaced. The testimonial photo will show our quoted person, Christine, using the standard GNOME desktop and terminals where she normally does her daily work on Fedora. The top photo will also be changed, I'm working with Mo right now to figure out a better one that properly shows off the GNOME environment. We are thinking something not-Firefox since the browser is common to many environments, i.e. not emblematic enough. -- Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/ gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ The open source story continues to grow: http://opensource.com -- desktop mailing list desktop@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/desktop
