It looks great, follows the Fedora 17 concept correctly. One suggestion: you might move the "17" more into the middle of the fireworks. Don't know if someone has already suggested that though. Thanks! In Christ, Ryan Sent from my iPod On May 6, 2012, at 7:00 AM, design-team-request@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx wrote: > Send design-team mailing list submissions to > design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > To subscribe or unsubscribe via the World Wide Web, visit > https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/design-team > or, via email, send a message with subject or body 'help' to > design-team-request@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > You can reach the person managing the list at > design-team-owner@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > When replying, please edit your Subject line so it is more specific > than "Re: Contents of design-team digest..." > > > Today's Topics: > > 1. F17 - Media artwork (sleeves concept) (Alexander Smirnov) > 2. Re: F17 - Media artwork (sleeves concept) (Elad Alfassa) > 3. Re: F17 - Media artwork (sleeves concept) (María Leandro) > 4. Re: F17 - Media artwork (sleeves concept) (Onyeibo Oku) > 5. Re: F17 - Media artwork (sleeves concept) (S.Kemter) > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Message: 1 > Date: Sat, 5 May 2012 16:05:59 +0400 > From: Alexander Smirnov <inkscaper@xxxxxxxxx> > To: Fedora Design Team <design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> > Subject: F17 - Media artwork (sleeves concept) > Message-ID: > <CAJB_CCeCo=LhrV5Dw5vmqq3OmRTixmqXKmbG-CJrajOz26C5JQ@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> > Content-Type: text/plain; charset="iso-8859-1" > > Hi team! > > I uploaded to my fedorapeople space [1] Fedora 17 base sleeves concept > (Hotdog presents Fedora 17 :) ). > > [1] - > http://inkscaper.fedorapeople.org/Fedora17/media-artwork/Fedora-17-installationmedia-32.png > > Thanks, > Alexander. > -------------- next part -------------- > An HTML attachment was scrubbed... > URL: <http://lists.fedoraproject.org/pipermail/design-team/attachments/20120505/863a52d9/attachment-0001.html> > > ------------------------------ > > Message: 2 > Date: Sat, 5 May 2012 15:08:26 +0300 > From: Elad Alfassa <elad@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> > To: Fedora Design Team <design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> > Subject: Re: F17 - Media artwork (sleeves concept) > Message-ID: > <CAN0s7yRMN0LGj6+OUMRLTub7xQDWbVotBoaKMBcjfNrWeVZ-dg@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> > Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" > > On Sat, May 5, 2012 at 3:05 PM, Alexander Smirnov <inkscaper@xxxxxxxxx>wrote: > >> Hi team! >> >> I uploaded to my fedorapeople space [1] Fedora 17 base sleeves concept >> (Hotdog presents Fedora 17 :) ). >> >> [1] - >> http://inkscaper.fedorapeople.org/Fedora17/media-artwork/Fedora-17-installationmedia-32.png >> >> Thanks, >> Alexander. >> >> _______________________________________________ >> design-team mailing list >> design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx >> https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/design-team >> > > It looks great, although I personally prefer Beefy not being there. > > -- > -Elad Alfassa. > -------------- next part -------------- > An HTML attachment was scrubbed... > URL: <http://lists.fedoraproject.org/pipermail/design-team/attachments/20120505/fa15412a/attachment-0001.html> > > ------------------------------ > > Message: 3 > Date: Sat, 5 May 2012 14:14:03 +0200 > From: María Leandro <tatica@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> > To: Fedora Design Team <design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> > Subject: Re: F17 - Media artwork (sleeves concept) > Message-ID: > <CAN_NMjzFaiAmOxU8o1WbH0ZzdpmgxvRDx2QQmV7ObKOiJEjv+Q@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> > Content-Type: text/plain; charset="iso-8859-1" > > hello!!! > > > that's great! However, I agree with elad. and if you could place the > sparkling 17 not over the fireworks but lets say just above the ïnstalation > dvd" sentence that could look cool too. > > maybe you can do those changes and send us a mockup just to take a look :) > > 2012/5/5 Elad Alfassa <elad@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> > >> >> >> On Sat, May 5, 2012 at 3:05 PM, Alexander Smirnov <inkscaper@xxxxxxxxx>wrote: >> >>> Hi team! >>> >>> I uploaded to my fedorapeople space [1] Fedora 17 base sleeves concept >>> (Hotdog presents Fedora 17 :) ). >>> >>> [1] - >>> http://inkscaper.fedorapeople.org/Fedora17/media-artwork/Fedora-17-installationmedia-32.png >>> >>> Thanks, >>> Alexander. >>> >>> _______________________________________________ >>> design-team mailing list >>> design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx >>> https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/design-team >>> >> >> It looks great, although I personally prefer Beefy not being there. >> >> -- >> -Elad Alfassa. >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> design-team mailing list >> design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx >> https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/design-team >> > > > > -- > tatica > Maria Gracia Leandro > http://www.tatica.org > http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/User:tatica > LinuxUser= 440285 GPG Public Key: E1CDCC56 > -------------- next part -------------- > An HTML attachment was scrubbed... > URL: <http://lists.fedoraproject.org/pipermail/design-team/attachments/20120505/3a0c95ed/attachment-0001.html> > > ------------------------------ > > Message: 4 > Date: Sat, 05 May 2012 18:47:25 +0100 > From: Onyeibo Oku <twohotis@xxxxxxxxx> > To: Fedora Design Team <design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> > Subject: Re: F17 - Media artwork (sleeves concept) > Message-ID: <1336240045.5911.9.camel@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> > Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" > > On Sat, 2012-05-05 at 16:05 +0400, Alexander Smirnov wrote: >> Hi team! >> >> I uploaded to my fedorapeople space [1] Fedora 17 base sleeves concept >> (Hotdog presents Fedora 17 :) ). >> >> [1] - >> http://inkscaper.fedorapeople.org/Fedora17/media-artwork/Fedora-17-installationmedia-32.png >> >> Thanks, >> Alexander. > > Awesome as always. > > My Comments: > ------------ > 1. Moving the glowing '17' as suggested by Tatica would be great but I > get the drift here. That option will make it look more formal and > serious but I guess Alex wants to communicate excitement and fun (as per > the fireworks). So I would suggest a varying intensity of glow on the > '17' to give the impression that the fireworks is producing the '17'. > If that's not possible ... Leave it there anyway. Its less formal and > this release has a 'fun' undertone to it. (OR we vote) > > 2. The beefy looks a bit too 'cartoony' -- I would rather use outlines > with transparencies to represent that (something like the '17' but more > subtle in presentation). Black arm, and brown sandwiching ... those > colours don't combine well with a heavy blue theme. > > Regards > Onyeibo > > > > ------------------------------ > > Message: 5 > Date: Sun, 6 May 2012 00:33:23 +0200 > From: "S.Kemter" <sirko.kemter@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> > To: Fedora Design Team <design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> > Subject: Re: F17 - Media artwork (sleeves concept) > Message-ID: > <CAKBdXudRrGc4_Eah17o85pqqi74td1Bqc=e3jzPeT2C6aOfkRw@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> > Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 > > Hi, > > Alexander it looks really nice, for me the 17 can stay there, the > position makes it really glowing and a part of the firework. > > About the beefy, I agree with Elad, Tatica and T2hot it should be > better not there. Mizmo has also that opinion. > > btw greetings from LibreGraphicsMeeting in Vienna, we all will > hopefully com safely back home and can talk about next week more > > br gnokii > > 2012/5/5, Onyeibo Oku <twohotis@xxxxxxxxx>: >> On Sat, 2012-05-05 at 16:05 +0400, Alexander Smirnov wrote: >>> Hi team! >>> >>> I uploaded to my fedorapeople space [1] Fedora 17 base sleeves concept >>> (Hotdog presents Fedora 17 :) ). >>> >>> [1] - >>> http://inkscaper.fedorapeople.org/Fedora17/media-artwork/Fedora-17-installationmedia-32.png >>> >>> Thanks, >>> Alexander. >> >> Awesome as always. >> >> My Comments: >> ------------ >> 1. Moving the glowing '17' as suggested by Tatica would be great but I >> get the drift here. That option will make it look more formal and >> serious but I guess Alex wants to communicate excitement and fun (as per >> the fireworks). So I would suggest a varying intensity of glow on the >> '17' to give the impression that the fireworks is producing the '17'. >> If that's not possible ... Leave it there anyway. Its less formal and >> this release has a 'fun' undertone to it. (OR we vote) >> >> 2. The beefy looks a bit too 'cartoony' -- I would rather use outlines >> with transparencies to represent that (something like the '17' but more >> subtle in presentation). Black arm, and brown sandwiching ... those >> colours don't combine well with a heavy blue theme. >> >> Regards >> Onyeibo >> >> _______________________________________________ >> design-team mailing list >> design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx >> https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/design-team > > > ------------------------------ > > _______________________________________________ > design-team mailing list > design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/design-team > > End of design-team Digest, Vol 37, Issue 6 > ****************************************** _______________________________________________ design-team mailing list design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/design-team
