On Sat, 2012-05-05 at 16:05 +0400, Alexander Smirnov wrote: > Hi team! > > I uploaded to my fedorapeople space [1] Fedora 17 base sleeves concept > (Hotdog presents Fedora 17 :) ). > > [1] - > http://inkscaper.fedorapeople.org/Fedora17/media-artwork/Fedora-17-installationmedia-32.png > > Thanks, > Alexander. Awesome as always. My Comments: ------------ 1. Moving the glowing '17' as suggested by Tatica would be great but I get the drift here. That option will make it look more formal and serious but I guess Alex wants to communicate excitement and fun (as per the fireworks). So I would suggest a varying intensity of glow on the '17' to give the impression that the fireworks is producing the '17'. If that's not possible ... Leave it there anyway. Its less formal and this release has a 'fun' undertone to it. (OR we vote) 2. The beefy looks a bit too 'cartoony' -- I would rather use outlines with transparencies to represent that (something like the '17' but more subtle in presentation). Black arm, and brown sandwiching ... those colours don't combine well with a heavy blue theme. Regards Onyeibo _______________________________________________ design-team mailing list design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/design-team
