Well, the three aren't that abstract either (except elements on the elephant sample & floating castle). It all depends on the amount of steampunk-ness involved. I think the problem with this image is not the concept but the finishing. Water and the associated caustics is something that takes dedication and time to master. This is a huge undertaking that demands encouragement on the part of the critics. I believe in this art. Keep it going. sent from mobile device -----Original Message----- From: Elad <el.il@xxxxxxxxxx> Sender: design-team-bounces@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Date: Sat, 2 Jul 2011 09:24:29 To: Fedora Design Team<design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> Reply-To: Fedora Design Team <design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> Subject: Re: [Design-team] another wallpaprt with nautilus 2011/7/2 Máirín Duffy <duffy@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>: > On Sat, 2011-07-02 at 00:04 +0000, Chris Jones wrote: >> On Sat, Jul 2, 2011 at 8:28 AM, Catalin <catalinfest@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: >> > I try to improve my 3d image , next will try to create a volumetric >> > material of water >> > This is result : >> > http://publictest04.fedoraproject.org/artboard/post/view/59 >> >> Is this some sort of joke? That's terrible. > > Are there any specific points for improvement about the image you're > seeing that you could verbalize to help Catalin? E.g., is the texture > too high-contrast? Is the color palette too pale or too monochromatic? > Is there an issue with the composition? These kind of critiques can help > Catalin make what he's working on better and he can tell us more about > his plans for future iterations. > > Is there anything in particular you would suggest to improve the image? > > Let's try to provide each other specific points for critique or at least > some suggestions for improvement when providing feedback about each > other's work! > > ¬m > > _______________________________________________ > design-team mailing list > design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/design-team I don't think this would be a good wallpaper, it's not abstract enough in my opinion. Great 3D though. -- -Elad Alfassa. _______________________________________________ design-team mailing list design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/design-team _______________________________________________ design-team mailing list design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/design-team
