----- "Bryan Nielsen" <bnielsen1965@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > I uploaded the latest render... > http://xorengineering.com/dev/icons/ > > With blue backgrounds, microscopic text and the glossy reflection > from > the computer display icons. > Howdy Bryen. Excellent progress! Still ready for some nitpicks? ;) I would curve the corners of the blue screen slightly. Really just a half-pixel so it's not that sharp compared to the outer border-radius. You can also shade the stroke with a gradient as well so it doesn't feel so flat -- darker on top, lighter at the bottom. I would chop that one pixel row on the 16x16 so that the switch is surrounded by the same padding on both sides. Lower the opacity of the white text lines down a notch. Tweak the switch on the 32 and 48 to be less tall so it's more consistent in shape between the sizes. The smaller the size, the more contrast you usually need to put in. As you can see on the glass reflection -- it's nicely visible on the 48, but a lot harder to make out on the 32. Now that you are getting the hang of it, I am looking forward to more icons :) cheers -- Jakub Steiner http://jimmac.musichall.cz _______________________________________________ design-team mailing list design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/design-team
