2010/10/4 Alexander Smirnov <inkscaper@xxxxxxxxx>: > Hi all! > > Desktop Live Media sleeve - > http://inkscaper.fedorapeople.org/Fedora14/media-artwork/Fedora-14-live-media.jpg > KDE Desktop Live Media sleeve - > http://inkscaper.fedorapeople.org/Fedora14/media-artwork/Fedora-14-kde-live-media.jpg Awesome work, Alexander! I especially like that the wallpaper is dark enough at the left side to make the text readable. Great layout. :) A few suggestions: - The "join.fedoraproject.org" and the copyright notice are centered while the rest of the text is aligned to the left. It makes it look kind of off, I think putting those two to the left or using some other solution (for instance, putting "join.fedoraproject.org" and the copyright notice together) would make it a bit stronger. - The number "14" isn't aligned with the text below it. - I like the blue overlay, but the colour doesn't quite match with the rest of the wallpaper. I think the hue isn't quite right: the wallpaper seems to be more on the purple side compared to the blue used for the overlay. It's a minute difference though, on one of my monitors it's slightly noticeable but on the other it looks great. - The text looks fine to me (I'm not a marketing guy), but it does contain a bit of geekspeak. Things like "Fedora environment" and "follow the prompts"... For instance, maybe "instructions" would be a better word for "prompts"? Do others agree, of am I imagining things? ;) - Like Máirín, I also thought that maybe we could lose the GNOME logo, since it's the default. I don't know how "acceptable" that is though... Hope some of this helps! - Jef _______________________________________________ design-team mailing list design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/design-team
