Hi Jef, Thanks for the suggestions. Don't worry - you don't sound mean ;). It's easy to miss little details sometimes when you're finishing things up really quickly during lunch :) On your first point, I had the background quite dark because I didn't want the logo to get lost. On one of my monitors (not calibrated, mind you) the logo on the first page got a bit lost in the background, so I made it darker to be on the safe side. That said, I like the change you made with the background. I do like seeing the pattern all the way up the page. To your second point, grr stupid OOo... Thirdly, I like the change to the question text - it does make it more consistent. However, I think changing the position of the contact info/logo to the right corner makes that corner look a bit crowded. Thanks for your input - it's very helpful! Let me know if you have any other ideas! Emily On Thu, 2010-07-15 at 22:18 +0200, Jef van Schendel wrote: > 2010/7/15 Máirín Duffy <duffy@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>: > > Hi folks :) > > > > On Fri, 2010-07-09 at 16:30 -0400, Máirín Duffy wrote: > >> http://mairin.wordpress.com/2010/07/09/fedora-design-bounty-fedora-slide-deck-template/ > >> > >> This one is for the slide deck template. Please feel free to re-dent, > >> tweet, or do whatever you do to spread the word :) > > > > It looks like we have our second design bounty ninja. :) > > > > Here's Emily's work: > > > > "I’m done! \o/ > > > > "I uploaded the template to the wiki. If anyone wants to take a look at > > the template file and the svg mockup file I used for all the extra > > graphics, you can get them here: > > http://www.fightingcrane.com/emily/fedora/ > > > > "If anyone has any comments or critiques (be gentle! ;) ) just let me > > know. Thanks!" > > > > > > Can you folks look over the otp file Emily has provided us and provide > > some critique? I really like the pattern she came up with as well as the > > slide gradient. It gives the slides a nice depth and it makes the text > > easier to read I think. > > > > ~m > > > > _______________________________________________ > > design-team mailing list > > design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/design-team > > Hi Emily! > > Welcome, fellow Bounty Ninja! :D > > Great work on the slides... I love the background pattern. Fun and > Fedora-like, better looking than a plain background yet not > distracting. Excellent. Also love the cute little Fedora-features > bullet points. :) > > As for critique... Overall I like it but there's a few small things I > think need a little adjustment. Just ideas, see what you do with 'em! > > ~ I thought the black from the background gradient was a little too > dark, so I made it dark grey instead. I put a new version in the > edited .odp, but there's an even newer one in the .svg and .png (made > the pattern a little less obvious). > ~ If you expand the left border of the "Presentation Title" text to > the left border of the slide, it won't change position anymore when > you change the text (which it did in my OpenOffice). Seems like a > weird bug/setting in OOo... > ~ I made the text from the "Questions" slide the same as the > "Topic..." slides, I personally think it looks a little better if > they're similar. > > And even smaller nitpicks: > > ~ The license text in the bottom right corner isn't equally space from > the right border and the bottom. Moved it down a bit to correct this. > ~ I changed "Presented By:" to "Presented by" because I think it looks > a little cleaner. Opinions may vary on this though. Darn, I just > noticed it isn't aligned with the text below it now... Needs an edit. > ~ Made some other small edits to the layout of the "Questions" slide: > moved the license down a bit, removed the : from "Contact:", made the > Fedora logo the same size as the text next to it and placed it all in > the bottom right corner. Again, just my opinion. > > Gosh I sound mean here... I'm no expert so take all this with a grain > of salt. Hope some of it is useful! :) > > Looking forward to having you on the team, > > Jef > > Edited slide: http://schendje.fedorapeople.org/temp/Slide%20Deck%20Template%20Jef.odp > Edited background: http://schendje.fedorapeople.org/temp/slide-mockup-1.png > Edited background source: > http://schendje.fedorapeople.org/temp/slide-mockup-jef.svg > _______________________________________________ > design-team mailing list > design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/design-team > _______________________________________________ design-team mailing list design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/design-team
