On Wed, 2009-07-08 at 17:34 -0500, bm90fox wrote: > Taking on account your last comunication, I has been changed the > concept for the label of F12, and here is: Issues with the design that still remain - only a couple have been address. These same problems I cited before are still there: - we have had a general rule for a long time now that we don't put release names in the artwork, the release name is here. - the usage of the Fedora logo mark as a border violates multiple logo usage rules :) - you can't use a keyline around the Fedora logomark either - logo guidelines rule. you still have this. - it doesn't look like the 'Constantine' typeface is still not the correct one, but either way it is not a good idea to have English text in the artwork as it requires translation, nor is it good to mark artwork with a particular release as it dates it for people who may want to use the artwork it later releases. This introduces a few new issues as well: - the background of the fedora logo is a blue square that does not match the grid pattern behind it. - the fedora logo artwork looks like it was blown up from a lower resolution so it is pixelated and of poor quality. Overall, I question what goal you are trying to achieve with this artwork. I don't get any kind of message or feeling from it - what message are you trying to communicate? >From a usability perspective, the background pattern is very noisy and vibrates a lot of my monitor, and I do not think such a high-contrast, vibrating pattern is very suitable for a background artwork piece as it's distracting. ~m _______________________________________________ design-team mailing list design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/design-team
