El jue, 23-04-2009 a las 06:55 -0700, Máirín Duffy escribió: > Hi Israel! > > > > ----- Original Message ---- > > From: Israel Rodríguez <israeldep@xxxxxxxxx> > > To: Fedora Art List <fedora-art-list@xxxxxxxxxx> > > Sent: Thursday, April 23, 2009 9:14:58 AM > > Subject: Re: 4Flags (from DesignService) > > > > OK, I contacted with the requester and he liked this. About your > > observation: > > - Yes, are available, then I link it. > > - ok > > - Yes I used the same photo, then I write it credits (the requester ask > > me if I can do some variations with the lions, to use this in next > > releases, and I will do it. > > - If Art team want it, I delete the gradients (or I make them smoother) > > Thanks for the work! I have some feedback for you, I hope it's helpful: > > - The general layout is great, simple and clean, and you've positioned the elements very well in relationship to each other. These flags will definitely make an impact! > - Where are your sources? We need the sources to be posted to the wiki so others can participate. (If there were sources posted I could have quickly mocked up some ideas for improvement to give to you) Sources (https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/File:4f-flag-source.svg) are now posted on the wiki (https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Artwork/DesignService#4foundations_Flags_for_events) > - The gradients and drop shadows don't really match a lot of our artwork so I would recommend pulling them out. It also looks like the colors of the four icons have been modified. I would stick with the original colors in the file you got them from - I think either Ian Weller or Clint Savage put together a list of color standards for these so you might want to check with them to make sure you're using the right color ocdes. OK, there are a variation with original colors on source file ;) > - You're using MG Open Modata, which is perfect, but you're using the bold variant. We typically only use the regular version of this font (the bold version is kind of goofy-looking.) Can you try with the regular version? OK > - The black of the lion seems a little less than ideal compared bright / tropical almost coloring of the four foundations artwork. Can you try a variant with a white lion? It might make the flag brighter and go together a bit better. OK, a white lion will look great! > - These kinds of banners are quite expensive to print, you may want to consider a design that is not F11 specific so that they can be reused (more ecological too!) :) They are a lot of possibilities about this, I designed a variation, but isn't finished yet (it's included on source) Please, make corrections on source to show your ideas > > Thanks again for your work, it is great! :O Thanks ;) Israel > > ~m > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > Fedora-art-list mailing list > Fedora-art-list@xxxxxxxxxx > http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list _______________________________________________ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@xxxxxxxxxx http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
