> > Looks great. Although the grammar could be improved slightly. > > You put: > > 'You provide the pen, the rest it's up to us' > > Should say: > > 'You provide the pen, the rest is up to us' I disown the line. ;) It was originally there[1], I haven't changed it. :) I didn't notice it either, but yes, the second line is more correct. [1] http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Marketing/LiveUsbCreator. -- Regards, Susmit. ============================================= ssh 0x86DD170A http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/user:susmit ============================================= _______________________________________________ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@xxxxxxxxxx http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
