2008/11/20 Máirín Duffy <duffy@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>: > Hi Jayme, > > Jayme Ayres wrote: >> >> Hi folks, >> I have had some ideas for the DVD label and have done two designs. >> >> http://jaymeayres.com/arquivos/fedora/f10/fedora10-CD-DVD-jayme1.png >> http://jaymeayres.com/arquivos/fedora/f10/fedora10-CD-DVD-jayme2.png > > These are very nice! I really like how the flares have been integrated in to > the design. One glaring issue though is that you can't put a keyline around > the Fedora logo like that. You have to find another way to make it stand out > against the background or even remove it (since there is already a fedora > logo in the center right maybe the 10 could be added there and the top of > the disc left blank?) > > Some other points of critique I hope you'll find helpful: > > - The font around the edge of the disc doesn't look like MgOpen Modata. Now is ok. > - You might want to tweak the smaller Fedora logo in the center right closer > towards the flames (or maybe pull the flame in a bit more) so the entirety > of the Fedora infinity logomark is on top of the light blue and is > discernable from the background. Ok I changed it. > - I wouldn't use the . in "10." I would take it out for the label. No more dot =) Updated: http://jaymeayres.com/arquivos/fedora/f10/fedora10-CD-DVD-jayme1.png http://jaymeayres.com/arquivos/fedora/f10/fedora10-CD-DVD-jayme2.png Sources: http://jaymeayres.com/arquivos/fedora/f10/fedora10-CD-DVD-jayme.svg http://jaymeayres.com/arquivos/fedora/f10/fedora10-CD-DVD-jayme2.svg > > Also, just as a note, as I had mentioned yesterday on the list, I already > had the basic designs for the disc labels done - we had decided back during > F9 to go with a standard label design to simplify printing moving forward. > However, that design is meant for the professionally-done screen printed > version of the discs. This design, with the fixes above, would be a fine > alternative for folks looking to print smaller runs on their own equipment. > > ~m > > _______________________________________________ > Fedora-art-list mailing list > Fedora-art-list@xxxxxxxxxx > http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list > -- Jayme Ayres www.jaymeayres.com www.projetofedora.org http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/JaymeAyres _______________________________________________ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@xxxxxxxxxx http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
