On Tue, 2008-06-24 at 15:44 -0700, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote: > New draft of system-lock-screen based on computer icon. Comments welcome. > > Luya > > Reference: > -------------- > http://luya.fedorapeople.org/echo/actions Not bad, here are few comments: * 16x16 version seems to have not very well defined shape, perhaps will need further simplification * 22x22 (and 24x24) version should use flat perspective instead of on-the-table * 32x32 is rendered in 16x16, I cannot say, if it's 32x32 or 16x16 one by looking at the png * 48x48 - the top line is a little blurry, you can easily make it sharp if you create the perspective by following the on the table perspective how-to [1] (err... I just noticed it's probably because the lines are not perfectly vertical/horizontal. Seems like you took the isometric monitor and only deformed it in inkscape... Would be better to copy over only the content of the display [wallpaper] and redraw the rest from scratch) * the shadow in on-the-table and flat perspective icons should be only bellow the icon, unlike in the isometric one * is there any particular reason for the lock to be plain white? * it would also help to create more contrast between the top and front faces of the display Martin References: [1] https://fedorahosted.org/echo-icon-theme/wiki/Guidelines/OnTheTablePerspective
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