On Tuesday 26 February 2008 10:06:22 pm Nicu Buculei wrote: > That is not bad for your first one, keep up with the work! > > I would make the halo (white blur) more softer and do something to the > logo - add also a halo, a shadow, a highlight, something. (how about > moving it under the highlight on the land?) I still don't understand these words properly :( Can you please make a few screencasts with audio for the newbies like me :) > > Also you may want to play a bit with the position and not have > everything in the center, for example > http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rule_of_thirds (but you can use other > composition techniques). I use that for photography, never thought of using that here though :) > And you may want to do something with the background (the water): plain > color is a bit boring, use a gradient or a texture. Will use these techniques and will make a few derivatives . Kushal -- Fedora Ambassador, India http://kushaldas.in http://dgplug.org (Linux User Group of Durgapur) _______________________________________________ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@xxxxxxxxxx http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
